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Dialogue Exercises

April 10, 2008 · 1 Comment

3rd person:

“Which is apparently unprecedented, or not unprecedented, but—”

“But very unusual.”

“Largely. Yeah, largely.”

Thomas looked back down at the newspaper and continued to read.

“Historical,” she said.

He nodded. She was looking out the window, staring the sun down. It cut into her eyes and made her squint. Thomas paused in his reading to examine her over the top of his newspaper. He thought her rather pretty.

“Oh, if I could go back now…” The sun threw sparks into her red hair.

“Go back…”

She tore her eyes away from the sun to look at him, and he thought he saw its light still lingering there.

“Home.”

And she was squinting at the sun again.

2nd person:

“I really want more chicken, but there isn’t any more.”

What do you say to that? You might say gee, that’s really too bad or you might say maybe that’s because you ate it all, but you think it best not to say anything, so you continue looking down at your plate of food and continue feeding yourself, pretending you didn’t hear.

“I need more water.”

You’ve been sitting here for an hour now and you wished fifty-four minutes ago that you hadn’t listened to your friend who’d set you up. After her first plate of food you’d already listed twelve other places you’d rather be, and by the time she finished her fourth course, you’d revised it to include twenty-seven others.

She has her mouth full but she manages to talk between chews and swallows.

“The beef’s a little salty but it’s bearable.”

No, you think. It’s not bearable. In fact you find her quite repulsive.

Look, you say. They’re putting the buffet away. The restaurant is closing.

She looks surprised. “Oh!” A bit of meat flies from her mouth and lands two inches away from your fork.

You stand up to excuse yourself and walk quickly towards the restroom.

1st person:

“Cigarette for the winner?”

He passed one to me and I lit it against the wind.

He laughed. “I’m the only fucking sober one here.”

I watched as he swung the beer bottle in the direction of his mouth and missed, sending glugs of beer down the front of his shirt. He cast the empty bottle aside and I watched as it rolled down the pavement, gritting against the cement and making a hollow sound.

He made to stand up but swayed instead. I stood to help him but he pushed me aside, angry now.

“I’m the only damn fucking sober one here.”

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Dialogue Exercise: Sophie, Or Prince Fred

March 13, 2008 · Leave a Comment

“I think I should put you in bed, Sophie.”

“But Simone! You can’t go to sleep in the middle of a tea party, you just can’t. And also I think you forgot, but my name isn’t Sophie it’s Prince Fred and besides, you can’t leave the castle unless I let down the gate over the moat and the moat has water-dragons in it so I don’t think you should swim across it. You should probably just wait until I let down the gate—this is the moat here, all the way to the end of this hallway (I can stand in it because I feed the water-dragons so they know that if they eat me they won’t get any more food even if they get to eat me because they’ll get even more food if they don’t eat me) and this room is the castle and I’ll pretend I’m letting down the gate when I go like this.”

“Okay Soph—Prince Fred. I shan’t cross your moat lest I be eaten, but could you please let down your gate. It is two hours past your bedtime and I fear the king and queen may be back at any minute.”

“The king and queen, the king and queen! A ring and a bean, the king and the queen!”

“Prince Fred. Do you want to be in trouble with the king and queen?”

“I’m never in trouble because my mom and my dad like me too much so they are always taking my side.”

“Oh really.”

“Yes. Sometimes I even just pretend to be asleep when they come check on me and then when they leave I make a fort with my blankets and think about a lot of things.”

“You make a fort with your blankets?”

“Yes, I do, and sometimes I take my little flashlight that’s on my keychain and read and sometimes I just make shadow puppets but that’s sort of hard sometimes because I have to hold the keychain like this with one hand and then I can’t make eagles because I need both hands to make eagles and eagles are my favorite because you can pretend they’re flying when you go like this. See?”

“I see. So maybe we can go to your room and set up a fort so that you can make shadow puppets and I can hold the flashlight for you.”

“What a great idea! And then I can show you all my special blankets and the quilt that me and my mom are making and I get to pick out the squares of fabric and she sews them on. It’s really neat.”

“That does sound neat. Okay, you go brush your teeth while I put these teacups away, alright? Can you brush your teeth on your own?”

“Yes but maybe you should help me put the toothpaste on because sometimes I put too much and then my mouth gets really foamy and my dad tells me I look like a mad dog.”

“Okay. You get everything ready and change into your pajamas and I’ll be right there, sound good?”

(unfinished as of yet)

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