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Prose Snapshots

April 27, 2008 · Leave a Comment

He sat on the patched-up couch reading the Chinese newspaper with his large, gold-rimmed spectacles framing his kind eyes. The TV was on in front of him but he seemed not to notice, lost in reading about the world. But I was watching the girl in the TV. She talked back to her grandpa in disrespect and threw the allowance money he’d given her at his feet. I turned off the TV in defiance and marched over to my grandpa, thin on the over-sized couch that was falling apart, to give him a hug. And he folded his newspaper and hugged me back, unaware of the scene that had just passed.

Sometimes, at night, when the whole family was present, we would gather around the board-game Scrabble and put words together for points. My dad was the most serious about this, using his letters carefully, reading up on the rules and restrictions. But even so, he could never beat my mom, who assembled words in excitement, making the most interesting combinations, paying no heed to any such point system. She would get up to make some noodles as my dad took his time on his turn, and finish eating before he could tally up the score. And she’d smile playfully and wink at me, as it was always in her favor.

My sister was like a personal pest who would never stop following me around and copied everything I did. So I took her around sometimes. I did, because if I didn’t, she would start to cry. And because she was always there, she was witness to my acts of creativity, my imaginative genius. I created about ten million games for us to play. Four or five stuck. We played stuffed animals sometimes but I didn’t like the term “stuffed” because they were filled with something real, too, so I called them “little animals” and we referred to them as our “L.A.”s. She always wanted to be the bunnies so I let her be the bunnies and she wanted the cats so I let her have those, too. So I took on the personas of octopuses and armadillos, and when she saw that they were more interesting, we switched. And switched again.

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In-Class Exercise: Strange Words

April 10, 2008 · 1 Comment

5 words:
-slukie
-galiven
-vollow
-slitties
-selukilim

Salt

He’s searching all my cupboards again.

“I told you, I don’t have any.”

“Pepper, ground pepper, cloves…selukilim? You have selukilim and you don’t have salt?”

I smile as he galivenly sniffs the small bottle of selukilim. The kitchen is in a vollow state. Half-chopped onions litter the countertop. Chives, parsley…a whole slukie of vegetables still haven’t been washed.

“What’s this?” He pulls out a half-rotting zucchini from somewhere among the mass of decaying vegetables. He makes a face and tosses it into the slitties.

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Spring Break Stranger Studies (in England)

April 2, 2008 · Leave a Comment

Old Man in Hyde Park
The moment is his, surrounded on all sides by pigeons, the sun shining for him in a clear sky. He holds a brown paper bag of breadcrumbs in one hand and scatters them with his other. The pigeons’ feathers are dark and he wears a dark coat to match theirs. He takes comfort in their company because it is the only company he can find. Age has defined him, and he finds solace in the grounded pigeons who are really only there for the breadcrumbs, taking what they can get.

Two Musicians Under a Bridge
I heard them before I saw them. That’s what they were to me at first: a violin and a cello, acoustically magnified in what I can only describe as half-tunnel, half-bridge.

The violinist was tall. Thin. He moved as though the violin were playing him, its strings moving his hands, his body, in motion with the ups and downs of the melody. The bow made a dip and the violinist dipped his head accordingly.

The cello player sat on a three-legged stool. He was plump. His fingers plucked the living instrument not only in perfect harmony with its violin counterpart, but in notes that stood on their own.

He wore polished leather shoes. The violinist had a Burberry scarf draped loosely around his neck.

The cello case laid open on the ground in front of them. In it were a number of coins: pence pieces, mostly, a few pounds.

Woman in an Art Gallery
She moves from painting to painting with a sketchbook in hand and pauses in front of each one just long enough to sketch, in pencil, its general shapes and lines. She loses interest quickly, though, so that before she knows it, she has already been around the entire room, has already recaptured all the paintings. The room is one of many housing the impressionist collection. Monet is next door. Van Gogh is not here. These are lesser known works so she, by principal, gives them less time and pushes open the door to where Renoir resides and turns her sketchbook to a new page.

Three Brothers in a Pub
They all have a large glass of beer in front of them. A tall glass – half a liter, give or take. They are sitting at a square table, two on one side facing the other, conversing.

Let me begin with the eldest.
He claims his own side of the table, facing his two younger brothers. The beer in the glass before him is steadily diminishing, but I don’t see how, for there is no break in his speech to provide time for taking a whisk. He is the smooth-talker, I can tell, by the way he smiles at the waitress, the way he leans back in his chair nodding at each of his brothers in turn, explaining to them the ins and outs of life.

The middle brother has blue eyes and an honest expression. His hair is curly, unlike the other two, and he listens. He gives every word some thought and never argues, always an agreeable look on his face. And whenever someone talks, he turns to look at him with respectful attention.

The youngest of the three is shy, perhaps made that way by virtue of having two older brothers who take care of the talking, the charming, the answering of questions for him. He is looking down at his hands now, as his eldest brother carries on about politics or love, and wishes perhaps that the pretty waitress would address him, this time, when she asks for a second round of drinks.

Brittany’s Gran
“Milk. We need milk for the tea.” She got up again to retrieve the tiny silver pitcher of milk, set it on a dish, and place it on the table. At 88, she was really going. She had spent two hours this morning washing her hair and fixing it in curlers and now sported a reasonably well-styled mane for her guests. Every teacup had its gold-rimmed saucer and every saucer had its teaspoon. She shuffled back into her chair and looked around the table to see how everyone was getting on. Finally satisfied, she poured herself a cup of tea with milk and sugar, took a sip, proclaimed it to be too cold, and got up to boil more hot water.

Stranger on the White Cliffs of Dover
It is windy, so of course his long grey overcoat is flapping in the wind. He stands close to the edge of the white cliffs – close but not dangerously close, staring out to sea. He thinks he can just make out France in the distance, but the sky is grey and overcast and he is not sure whether it is low clouds or a land mass that he is seeing. He is alone here, or if there are other people, they are very far away, observing him from a distance as a lone grey figure flapping in the wind. He is looking for the bluebirds of the song but all that is here are the seagulls flying low under the grey clouds.

On The Airplane
She has been flying for over two years now so she knows what she’s doing. As soon as the plane finished its take-off ascent and leveled, she pulled off her black pumps and replaced them with her black loafers with cushioned insoles. Comfortable now, she approaches the passenger who has pushed his Call Attendant light. She smiles politely down at him and nods as he makes his requests. When he is done, she turns to perform her duty, listing off her errands on her fingers as she makes her way down the aisle.

One-Scene, Two-Sentence Story in which Three of These Characters Meet
The old woman got up from the table and bumped it as she did so, knocking the teacup from its gold-rimmed saucer and shattering it on the tiled floor. “Leave it,” her daughter said, pulling out her leather-bound sketchbook and her tin pencil case of newly sharpened charcoal pencils, beginning to sketch the fragments of china on the ground, ignoring her mother’s protests and getting angry when she began to clean up the mess and ruin her still life portrait, and getting angrier still when her boyfriend, who already had his violin out of its case, picked it up and began to play the melody of their argument.

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Dialogue Exercise: Sophie, Or Prince Fred

March 13, 2008 · Leave a Comment

“I think I should put you in bed, Sophie.”

“But Simone! You can’t go to sleep in the middle of a tea party, you just can’t. And also I think you forgot, but my name isn’t Sophie it’s Prince Fred and besides, you can’t leave the castle unless I let down the gate over the moat and the moat has water-dragons in it so I don’t think you should swim across it. You should probably just wait until I let down the gate—this is the moat here, all the way to the end of this hallway (I can stand in it because I feed the water-dragons so they know that if they eat me they won’t get any more food even if they get to eat me because they’ll get even more food if they don’t eat me) and this room is the castle and I’ll pretend I’m letting down the gate when I go like this.”

“Okay Soph—Prince Fred. I shan’t cross your moat lest I be eaten, but could you please let down your gate. It is two hours past your bedtime and I fear the king and queen may be back at any minute.”

“The king and queen, the king and queen! A ring and a bean, the king and the queen!”

“Prince Fred. Do you want to be in trouble with the king and queen?”

“I’m never in trouble because my mom and my dad like me too much so they are always taking my side.”

“Oh really.”

“Yes. Sometimes I even just pretend to be asleep when they come check on me and then when they leave I make a fort with my blankets and think about a lot of things.”

“You make a fort with your blankets?”

“Yes, I do, and sometimes I take my little flashlight that’s on my keychain and read and sometimes I just make shadow puppets but that’s sort of hard sometimes because I have to hold the keychain like this with one hand and then I can’t make eagles because I need both hands to make eagles and eagles are my favorite because you can pretend they’re flying when you go like this. See?”

“I see. So maybe we can go to your room and set up a fort so that you can make shadow puppets and I can hold the flashlight for you.”

“What a great idea! And then I can show you all my special blankets and the quilt that me and my mom are making and I get to pick out the squares of fabric and she sews them on. It’s really neat.”

“That does sound neat. Okay, you go brush your teeth while I put these teacups away, alright? Can you brush your teeth on your own?”

“Yes but maybe you should help me put the toothpaste on because sometimes I put too much and then my mouth gets really foamy and my dad tells me I look like a mad dog.”

“Okay. You get everything ready and change into your pajamas and I’ll be right there, sound good?”

(unfinished as of yet)

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100 words (/223 words): smoke

March 13, 2008 · Leave a Comment

My grandma is an eighty-year-old Chinese woman. Petite. Small feet. She stands at 5’0’’. Her hair, which is pure white, is cut short (because it is more practical that way). And she mends my socks in her spare time.

On this particular day, she is over at our apartment, mending my socks at the kitchen table. I am reading quietly beside her, and the balcony door is open, letting in summer air.

In the midst of my meditations, I become aware of an increasingly noticeable smell of cigarette smoke. My grandma looks up from her sewing as it seeps into the apartment through the screen door.

Two cigarette butts fall from the above balcony onto ours.

“Goddamn black people,” my grandma says loudly. She wets a thread and continues to sew.

What? I stare at her. What did you say, grandma?

“They must be black,” she says matter-of-factly. And in my shock, and abhorrence at her ignorance, I lash out. I fold my book and march to my room, shut my door, unwilling to have anything further to do with her.

But she made moon-cakes, that night, to make up for it. It was the wrong time of year to be eating moon-cakes, but she hand-made them and delivered them to my room where I was shut up, busy being ashamed of her.

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Braided Essay Exercise: A Cat-like Affair

March 13, 2008 · Leave a Comment

3 threads:
-cat
-marble
-school teacher

1st sentence is from Thackeray’s Vanity Fair

“Married! Married!” Rebecca said, in an agony of tears – her voice choking with emotion, her handkerchief up to her ready eyes, fainting against the mantelpiece – a figure of woe fit to melt the most obdurate heart. Hardly in a steady state of mind myself, I stood up to calm her. “Now, we mustn’t despair, Rebecca,” I consoled her as I sat her down in an armchair. “But a scandal, yes. An affair with her student!”

An affair, in nature, can be likened to a cat. A kitten, perhaps, in its early stages. Playful. Bemused. Curious.

He examined the glass marbles. “A collection?” he asked. “My grandpa’s,” she replied, “Not mine.” He looked fondly down at the ring on her finger. “I love marbles,” he said. Then, for clarification, “The game.”

Curious, it bats at the ball of yarn. Finds the loose end and holds on, somehow. The cat pulls and plays until it becomes entangled in strings – caught before it knows it.

Of course he does, she thought. She crossed the room, rearranging things as she went. He’s still a child. She bent over her coffee table and sifted through the pile of ungraded papers. Somewhere among them, his name flashed up at her.

Rebecca fell into a fresh fit of tears. “And to an American, no less!” She blew her nose loudly into her wet handkerchief. I handed her mine, which had managed to stay reasonably dry, and she took it without much acknowledgement. “He’ll make her stay in that cruel land and I shall never see her again! And a scandal…” She shook her head resignedly. “A mess, Martha. That’s what this is. A great mess.”

The cat, realizing it is entangled, begins to struggle. But it is wound in indifferent yarn.

A clash of breaking glass came from behind her and she wrenched her eyes from his name to turn in the direction of the sound. But marbles don’t shatter, she thought as she stared at the broken fragments littered across the floor.

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A History of Glass

March 10, 2008 · 1 Comment

I accidentally scrubbed the fishbowl too hard with a Brillo pad (those sponges with steel wool (a tangle of metal fibers) on one side) when I was cleaning it, so that now I can’t see the fish as clearly.

I want to scrub it until it breaks down into what it is made up of, (how does sand become glass anyway?), but that process can’t be reversed, of course, so the glass just gets less and less transparent—arbitrary lines mar its once smooth surface.

I want to stick metal rods in the sand in the middle of a lightning storm and collect the newly-forged glass, and break it into shards, and break the shards into shards, and wear those shards down with a Brillo pad until it becomes sand again.

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‘New York School of Poets’ exercise: In A Sunroom On A Wednesday Morning

March 8, 2008 · Leave a Comment

Why won’t he look at me?
We’re in the sunroom and we’re
dancing, circling
my green dress
billows out as I
spin
from one Picasso painting to
another
It’s Wednesday morning
and he just stepped off
the plane
from London
into my sunroom
and now he’s playing
the piano
of all things
to do on a Wednesday morning
He’s singing
“pretty Miss May won’t you
sing for me today”
and,
dizzy,
I hold onto the back
of a chair
and quietly stumble in place.

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On Storms

March 7, 2008 · 1 Comment

You are always talking about Minnesota. You can tell, when you get that glint in your eye, that you are going to start talking about Minnesota. Some people don’t even know where that is. Somewhere between the two coasts—somewhere in the middle of east and west. That is why when you talk about tornadoes, people always ask: “you get tornadoes in Minnesota?” And you nod, but what you miss most, now, are the thunderstorms that used to make the sky look sick.

On those rare occasions that the sky turned so green it looked like it was going to puke, you would run inside. Find a window. No screen, just glass.
And the feverish clouds began to forge: grey, slowly black; began to cough up hail: salt, in its crystalline structure, magnified.

Lightning, and, like a flickering x-ray screen, the bones of the sky.
The thunder is so violent it seems as though the sky is sneezing. Trembling. Looking for a tissue.

You pull back, slightly, from the glass, say “Bless you.”

And, reluctantly, the storm lets up.

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100 words: public bus

March 5, 2008 · 1 Comment

I was three quarters short, and everyone averted his eyes. I stood at the head of the bus, prodding, shaking my coin purse as if I’d missed something, fully aware I hadn’t, fully aware I was holding everyone up just by standing there, prodding, shaking my coin purse. People have meetings to get to, I told myself. I flipped over a nickel. Work, jobs, obligations. I turned a dime and shook my head. We are on a schedule here.

One quarter would be different. One quarter and someone would get up, say “Here, miss,” sit down. I snapped the clasp of my coin purse shut – smiled politely. “I think I need to make a trip to the bank”– looked around at the people looking out of windows, checking watches, feigning sleep. I smiled at them, politely, and stepped off the bus.

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