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Prose Snapshots

April 27, 2008 · Leave a Comment

He sat on the patched-up couch reading the Chinese newspaper with his large, gold-rimmed spectacles framing his kind eyes. The TV was on in front of him but he seemed not to notice, lost in reading about the world. But I was watching the girl in the TV. She talked back to her grandpa in disrespect and threw the allowance money he’d given her at his feet. I turned off the TV in defiance and marched over to my grandpa, thin on the over-sized couch that was falling apart, to give him a hug. And he folded his newspaper and hugged me back, unaware of the scene that had just passed.

Sometimes, at night, when the whole family was present, we would gather around the board-game Scrabble and put words together for points. My dad was the most serious about this, using his letters carefully, reading up on the rules and restrictions. But even so, he could never beat my mom, who assembled words in excitement, making the most interesting combinations, paying no heed to any such point system. She would get up to make some noodles as my dad took his time on his turn, and finish eating before he could tally up the score. And she’d smile playfully and wink at me, as it was always in her favor.

My sister was like a personal pest who would never stop following me around and copied everything I did. So I took her around sometimes. I did, because if I didn’t, she would start to cry. And because she was always there, she was witness to my acts of creativity, my imaginative genius. I created about ten million games for us to play. Four or five stuck. We played stuffed animals sometimes but I didn’t like the term “stuffed” because they were filled with something real, too, so I called them “little animals” and we referred to them as our “L.A.”s. She always wanted to be the bunnies so I let her be the bunnies and she wanted the cats so I let her have those, too. So I took on the personas of octopuses and armadillos, and when she saw that they were more interesting, we switched. And switched again.

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Spring Break Stranger Studies (in England)

April 2, 2008 · Leave a Comment

Old Man in Hyde Park
The moment is his, surrounded on all sides by pigeons, the sun shining for him in a clear sky. He holds a brown paper bag of breadcrumbs in one hand and scatters them with his other. The pigeons’ feathers are dark and he wears a dark coat to match theirs. He takes comfort in their company because it is the only company he can find. Age has defined him, and he finds solace in the grounded pigeons who are really only there for the breadcrumbs, taking what they can get.

Two Musicians Under a Bridge
I heard them before I saw them. That’s what they were to me at first: a violin and a cello, acoustically magnified in what I can only describe as half-tunnel, half-bridge.

The violinist was tall. Thin. He moved as though the violin were playing him, its strings moving his hands, his body, in motion with the ups and downs of the melody. The bow made a dip and the violinist dipped his head accordingly.

The cello player sat on a three-legged stool. He was plump. His fingers plucked the living instrument not only in perfect harmony with its violin counterpart, but in notes that stood on their own.

He wore polished leather shoes. The violinist had a Burberry scarf draped loosely around his neck.

The cello case laid open on the ground in front of them. In it were a number of coins: pence pieces, mostly, a few pounds.

Woman in an Art Gallery
She moves from painting to painting with a sketchbook in hand and pauses in front of each one just long enough to sketch, in pencil, its general shapes and lines. She loses interest quickly, though, so that before she knows it, she has already been around the entire room, has already recaptured all the paintings. The room is one of many housing the impressionist collection. Monet is next door. Van Gogh is not here. These are lesser known works so she, by principal, gives them less time and pushes open the door to where Renoir resides and turns her sketchbook to a new page.

Three Brothers in a Pub
They all have a large glass of beer in front of them. A tall glass – half a liter, give or take. They are sitting at a square table, two on one side facing the other, conversing.

Let me begin with the eldest.
He claims his own side of the table, facing his two younger brothers. The beer in the glass before him is steadily diminishing, but I don’t see how, for there is no break in his speech to provide time for taking a whisk. He is the smooth-talker, I can tell, by the way he smiles at the waitress, the way he leans back in his chair nodding at each of his brothers in turn, explaining to them the ins and outs of life.

The middle brother has blue eyes and an honest expression. His hair is curly, unlike the other two, and he listens. He gives every word some thought and never argues, always an agreeable look on his face. And whenever someone talks, he turns to look at him with respectful attention.

The youngest of the three is shy, perhaps made that way by virtue of having two older brothers who take care of the talking, the charming, the answering of questions for him. He is looking down at his hands now, as his eldest brother carries on about politics or love, and wishes perhaps that the pretty waitress would address him, this time, when she asks for a second round of drinks.

Brittany’s Gran
“Milk. We need milk for the tea.” She got up again to retrieve the tiny silver pitcher of milk, set it on a dish, and place it on the table. At 88, she was really going. She had spent two hours this morning washing her hair and fixing it in curlers and now sported a reasonably well-styled mane for her guests. Every teacup had its gold-rimmed saucer and every saucer had its teaspoon. She shuffled back into her chair and looked around the table to see how everyone was getting on. Finally satisfied, she poured herself a cup of tea with milk and sugar, took a sip, proclaimed it to be too cold, and got up to boil more hot water.

Stranger on the White Cliffs of Dover
It is windy, so of course his long grey overcoat is flapping in the wind. He stands close to the edge of the white cliffs – close but not dangerously close, staring out to sea. He thinks he can just make out France in the distance, but the sky is grey and overcast and he is not sure whether it is low clouds or a land mass that he is seeing. He is alone here, or if there are other people, they are very far away, observing him from a distance as a lone grey figure flapping in the wind. He is looking for the bluebirds of the song but all that is here are the seagulls flying low under the grey clouds.

On The Airplane
She has been flying for over two years now so she knows what she’s doing. As soon as the plane finished its take-off ascent and leveled, she pulled off her black pumps and replaced them with her black loafers with cushioned insoles. Comfortable now, she approaches the passenger who has pushed his Call Attendant light. She smiles politely down at him and nods as he makes his requests. When he is done, she turns to perform her duty, listing off her errands on her fingers as she makes her way down the aisle.

One-Scene, Two-Sentence Story in which Three of These Characters Meet
The old woman got up from the table and bumped it as she did so, knocking the teacup from its gold-rimmed saucer and shattering it on the tiled floor. “Leave it,” her daughter said, pulling out her leather-bound sketchbook and her tin pencil case of newly sharpened charcoal pencils, beginning to sketch the fragments of china on the ground, ignoring her mother’s protests and getting angry when she began to clean up the mess and ruin her still life portrait, and getting angrier still when her boyfriend, who already had his violin out of its case, picked it up and began to play the melody of their argument.

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Stranger Study (extended piece)

March 12, 2008 · Leave a Comment

I’ve been fiddling around with this a lot and finally decided it was time to post. I am not sure about this piece…the form, and especially the ending. Also, it’s only 185 words. Anyway, here it is (untitled as of yet):

He is average.

Eyes, cue, and ball align. He pulls his arm back, strikes the cue ball. Misses the pocket. Straightens up.

Average height.

He stands, eyes level with the light that hangs from the ceiling, that glows softly onto the pool table. Indifferently attentive is his manner, as he watches his opponent take his turn. Reservedly comfortable, he plants his feet, sets his stance, shifts his weight.

Average weight.

Not a football player, surely, nor an equestrian. What, then?

He prepares his play.

(A slight hesitation, unsure of whether he is solids or stripes.)

In the game of billiards, one is able to gather something about a person’s character. People calculate; he doesn’t calculate. He simply rests one hand on the table and hits the cue ball with the cue (always the same force, same motion), neither precise nor overly sloppy, never an extreme expression crossing his face.

Average looks.
(by anyone’s judgment)

Girls pass by, look, don’t linger.

His own eyes scan the table casually, indifferently attentive.

An eight ball is left.

He hits it, rolls it down the middle of the table.

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Stranger Study

March 10, 2008 · Leave a Comment

Sketches (3 sentences each):

1) physical description
He is average. Average height, average weight, average looks by anyone’s judgment. His hair, the common shade of medium-dark, is an average length, and his eyes are an average brown.

2) movement
In the game of billiards, one is able to gather something about a person’s character. People calculate; he doesn’t calculate. He simply rests one hand on the table and hits the cue ball with the cue (always the same force, same motion), neither precise nor overly sloppy, never an extreme expression crossing his face.

3) insert me
I am explaining to him the law of centrifugal motion and he looks at me over the top of his sandwich from which he is taking a bite and nods, sets it down, nods. I ask if he’s understood what I’ve just said and he holds up an index finger to indicate that he’s chewing. So I scan the room as I wait and by the time he’s done and my eyes return, he seems to have forgotten the question and is taking another bite.

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