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May 7, 2008 · Leave a Comment

The Twilight Parades

When all at once the daylight fades
and crabs run trails in the sand
then do begin the twilight parades
that twilight can demand

And crabs run trails in the sand
propelling the perfect stillness
that twilight can demand
but from which we shall now digress

Propelling the perfect stillness
waves tumble in low susurration
from which we shall now digress
at this hour of the moon’s calculation

Waves tumble in low susurration
washing creatures, peculiar, ashore
at this hour of the moon’s calculation
oysters arrive, with pearls for the poor

Washing creatures, peculiar, ashore
the falling tide leaves bigger plans
oysters arrive, with pearls for the poor
starfish come, then seashells and clams

The falling tide leaves bigger plans
for slowly begins the march
starfish come, then seashells and clams
the shrimp are the first to charge

For slowly begins the march
with lobsters all in a line
the shrimp are the first to charge
as seahorses follow closely behind

Lobsters standing all in a line
clicking their pincers in the lead
as seahorses follow closely behind
along the shore they softly proceed

Clicking their pincers in the lead
then do begin the twilight parades
along the shore they softly proceed
when all at once the daylight fades

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Myth Re-appropriation into poem

April 27, 2008 · 4 Comments

I Am Sisyphus

I am
more powerful than the gods
am
above
these so-called forces
of nature. Gravity
to me
is just another weight
to overcome.
And I believe,
after these trials,
the Underworld
escape,
games, merely,
that the rock will tip.

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Poem from prose snapshots

April 27, 2008 · 2 Comments

The Girl in the TV

They were framed
in large, gold-rimmed spectacles,
his eyes.
And my grandpa looked
through them
to read the newspaper.
I was beyond,
staring at the TV,
its already small frame
getting smaller
still,
with time.
And I watched the girl
in the TV
shout and scream
at her grandpa.
But my grandpa
did not see.
So I turned it off.
And removed his large,
gold-rimmed spectacles
so that I
might climb onto his lap
and read the newspaper.

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Prose Snapshots

April 27, 2008 · Leave a Comment

He sat on the patched-up couch reading the Chinese newspaper with his large, gold-rimmed spectacles framing his kind eyes. The TV was on in front of him but he seemed not to notice, lost in reading about the world. But I was watching the girl in the TV. She talked back to her grandpa in disrespect and threw the allowance money he’d given her at his feet. I turned off the TV in defiance and marched over to my grandpa, thin on the over-sized couch that was falling apart, to give him a hug. And he folded his newspaper and hugged me back, unaware of the scene that had just passed.

Sometimes, at night, when the whole family was present, we would gather around the board-game Scrabble and put words together for points. My dad was the most serious about this, using his letters carefully, reading up on the rules and restrictions. But even so, he could never beat my mom, who assembled words in excitement, making the most interesting combinations, paying no heed to any such point system. She would get up to make some noodles as my dad took his time on his turn, and finish eating before he could tally up the score. And she’d smile playfully and wink at me, as it was always in her favor.

My sister was like a personal pest who would never stop following me around and copied everything I did. So I took her around sometimes. I did, because if I didn’t, she would start to cry. And because she was always there, she was witness to my acts of creativity, my imaginative genius. I created about ten million games for us to play. Four or five stuck. We played stuffed animals sometimes but I didn’t like the term “stuffed” because they were filled with something real, too, so I called them “little animals” and we referred to them as our “L.A.”s. She always wanted to be the bunnies so I let her be the bunnies and she wanted the cats so I let her have those, too. So I took on the personas of octopuses and armadillos, and when she saw that they were more interesting, we switched. And switched again.

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Dialogue Exercises

April 10, 2008 · 1 Comment

3rd person:

“Which is apparently unprecedented, or not unprecedented, but—”

“But very unusual.”

“Largely. Yeah, largely.”

Thomas looked back down at the newspaper and continued to read.

“Historical,” she said.

He nodded. She was looking out the window, staring the sun down. It cut into her eyes and made her squint. Thomas paused in his reading to examine her over the top of his newspaper. He thought her rather pretty.

“Oh, if I could go back now…” The sun threw sparks into her red hair.

“Go back…”

She tore her eyes away from the sun to look at him, and he thought he saw its light still lingering there.

“Home.”

And she was squinting at the sun again.

2nd person:

“I really want more chicken, but there isn’t any more.”

What do you say to that? You might say gee, that’s really too bad or you might say maybe that’s because you ate it all, but you think it best not to say anything, so you continue looking down at your plate of food and continue feeding yourself, pretending you didn’t hear.

“I need more water.”

You’ve been sitting here for an hour now and you wished fifty-four minutes ago that you hadn’t listened to your friend who’d set you up. After her first plate of food you’d already listed twelve other places you’d rather be, and by the time she finished her fourth course, you’d revised it to include twenty-seven others.

She has her mouth full but she manages to talk between chews and swallows.

“The beef’s a little salty but it’s bearable.”

No, you think. It’s not bearable. In fact you find her quite repulsive.

Look, you say. They’re putting the buffet away. The restaurant is closing.

She looks surprised. “Oh!” A bit of meat flies from her mouth and lands two inches away from your fork.

You stand up to excuse yourself and walk quickly towards the restroom.

1st person:

“Cigarette for the winner?”

He passed one to me and I lit it against the wind.

He laughed. “I’m the only fucking sober one here.”

I watched as he swung the beer bottle in the direction of his mouth and missed, sending glugs of beer down the front of his shirt. He cast the empty bottle aside and I watched as it rolled down the pavement, gritting against the cement and making a hollow sound.

He made to stand up but swayed instead. I stood to help him but he pushed me aside, angry now.

“I’m the only damn fucking sober one here.”

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Extraordinary –> Ordinary

April 8, 2008 · Leave a Comment

(untitled as of yet)

They were not cries for help, but rather grunts of physical exertion. Walking along in the woods, enjoying the clear autumn day, Peter heard these noises from somewhere above, in the trees. He looked up and saw a girl stuck there.

Her head was lodged in an owl’s hole in the large oak that stood before him. She had a hand on either side of where her head would be, pushing against the trunk of the tree.

He stood awhile and looked up the fifty or so feet between them. And remembered, vaguely, a distant fear of heights.

Her body protruded perpendicularly from the trunk of the oak and held, horizontally, unsupported. It tightened with every effort of freeing her head. Loosened briefly, tightened again.

He did not consider helping her (the simple effort of thinking this was too much) and so lowered his head, turned down his gaze, and shuffled again through the damp leaves.

When he returned an hour later, following the trail back the way he had come, the low hoot of a common owl made him stop once more under the oak tree.

It was perched on a branch in the figure of a girl, resting on her right calf. Peter looked more closely and thought he saw her knees twist into knots, thought he caught a slow change from the folds in her clothing to the lines of the oak bark.

He stared at the girl, as if petrified, then, suddenly seized by some sense of urgency, hurried off in the direction of home.

The owl swiveled its head towards the hole now sealed by the girl. It raised one wing slightly, then settled it back into place.

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Kafka-like re-approriation of folktale

April 2, 2008 · 1 Comment

The Boy Who Cried

I don’t target sheep. I target shepherds. The other wolves look for weaklings in the flock – the young, the old, the frail and sick. I look for weaknesses in the shepherd.

This one was a liar. He performed so well, it only took me three days to get the job done. All I had to do the first two days was lay in the grass and watch the clouds go by, waiting, hidden, watching the villagers come running up the hill. And I would laugh with the boy at their angry faces. Then, I laughed alone at his weeping one.

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Spring Break Stranger Studies (in England)

April 2, 2008 · Leave a Comment

Old Man in Hyde Park
The moment is his, surrounded on all sides by pigeons, the sun shining for him in a clear sky. He holds a brown paper bag of breadcrumbs in one hand and scatters them with his other. The pigeons’ feathers are dark and he wears a dark coat to match theirs. He takes comfort in their company because it is the only company he can find. Age has defined him, and he finds solace in the grounded pigeons who are really only there for the breadcrumbs, taking what they can get.

Two Musicians Under a Bridge
I heard them before I saw them. That’s what they were to me at first: a violin and a cello, acoustically magnified in what I can only describe as half-tunnel, half-bridge.

The violinist was tall. Thin. He moved as though the violin were playing him, its strings moving his hands, his body, in motion with the ups and downs of the melody. The bow made a dip and the violinist dipped his head accordingly.

The cello player sat on a three-legged stool. He was plump. His fingers plucked the living instrument not only in perfect harmony with its violin counterpart, but in notes that stood on their own.

He wore polished leather shoes. The violinist had a Burberry scarf draped loosely around his neck.

The cello case laid open on the ground in front of them. In it were a number of coins: pence pieces, mostly, a few pounds.

Woman in an Art Gallery
She moves from painting to painting with a sketchbook in hand and pauses in front of each one just long enough to sketch, in pencil, its general shapes and lines. She loses interest quickly, though, so that before she knows it, she has already been around the entire room, has already recaptured all the paintings. The room is one of many housing the impressionist collection. Monet is next door. Van Gogh is not here. These are lesser known works so she, by principal, gives them less time and pushes open the door to where Renoir resides and turns her sketchbook to a new page.

Three Brothers in a Pub
They all have a large glass of beer in front of them. A tall glass – half a liter, give or take. They are sitting at a square table, two on one side facing the other, conversing.

Let me begin with the eldest.
He claims his own side of the table, facing his two younger brothers. The beer in the glass before him is steadily diminishing, but I don’t see how, for there is no break in his speech to provide time for taking a whisk. He is the smooth-talker, I can tell, by the way he smiles at the waitress, the way he leans back in his chair nodding at each of his brothers in turn, explaining to them the ins and outs of life.

The middle brother has blue eyes and an honest expression. His hair is curly, unlike the other two, and he listens. He gives every word some thought and never argues, always an agreeable look on his face. And whenever someone talks, he turns to look at him with respectful attention.

The youngest of the three is shy, perhaps made that way by virtue of having two older brothers who take care of the talking, the charming, the answering of questions for him. He is looking down at his hands now, as his eldest brother carries on about politics or love, and wishes perhaps that the pretty waitress would address him, this time, when she asks for a second round of drinks.

Brittany’s Gran
“Milk. We need milk for the tea.” She got up again to retrieve the tiny silver pitcher of milk, set it on a dish, and place it on the table. At 88, she was really going. She had spent two hours this morning washing her hair and fixing it in curlers and now sported a reasonably well-styled mane for her guests. Every teacup had its gold-rimmed saucer and every saucer had its teaspoon. She shuffled back into her chair and looked around the table to see how everyone was getting on. Finally satisfied, she poured herself a cup of tea with milk and sugar, took a sip, proclaimed it to be too cold, and got up to boil more hot water.

Stranger on the White Cliffs of Dover
It is windy, so of course his long grey overcoat is flapping in the wind. He stands close to the edge of the white cliffs – close but not dangerously close, staring out to sea. He thinks he can just make out France in the distance, but the sky is grey and overcast and he is not sure whether it is low clouds or a land mass that he is seeing. He is alone here, or if there are other people, they are very far away, observing him from a distance as a lone grey figure flapping in the wind. He is looking for the bluebirds of the song but all that is here are the seagulls flying low under the grey clouds.

On The Airplane
She has been flying for over two years now so she knows what she’s doing. As soon as the plane finished its take-off ascent and leveled, she pulled off her black pumps and replaced them with her black loafers with cushioned insoles. Comfortable now, she approaches the passenger who has pushed his Call Attendant light. She smiles politely down at him and nods as he makes his requests. When he is done, she turns to perform her duty, listing off her errands on her fingers as she makes her way down the aisle.

One-Scene, Two-Sentence Story in which Three of These Characters Meet
The old woman got up from the table and bumped it as she did so, knocking the teacup from its gold-rimmed saucer and shattering it on the tiled floor. “Leave it,” her daughter said, pulling out her leather-bound sketchbook and her tin pencil case of newly sharpened charcoal pencils, beginning to sketch the fragments of china on the ground, ignoring her mother’s protests and getting angry when she began to clean up the mess and ruin her still life portrait, and getting angrier still when her boyfriend, who already had his violin out of its case, picked it up and began to play the melody of their argument.

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Stranger Study

March 10, 2008 · Leave a Comment

Sketches (3 sentences each):

1) physical description
He is average. Average height, average weight, average looks by anyone’s judgment. His hair, the common shade of medium-dark, is an average length, and his eyes are an average brown.

2) movement
In the game of billiards, one is able to gather something about a person’s character. People calculate; he doesn’t calculate. He simply rests one hand on the table and hits the cue ball with the cue (always the same force, same motion), neither precise nor overly sloppy, never an extreme expression crossing his face.

3) insert me
I am explaining to him the law of centrifugal motion and he looks at me over the top of his sandwich from which he is taking a bite and nods, sets it down, nods. I ask if he’s understood what I’ve just said and he holds up an index finger to indicate that he’s chewing. So I scan the room as I wait and by the time he’s done and my eyes return, he seems to have forgotten the question and is taking another bite.

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250-word sketch: Catching Dragonflies

March 4, 2008 · 3 Comments

Tall grasses, ones that can only be found near marsh land and still water. A child plodding through them, hands first, pulling the grasses apart as if opening drapery. Her grandpa beside her, she marches through the green world, batting cattails out of her way, sending droplets of dew into the still air.

She is the bringer of color this morning. The vibrancy of a green just waking flows to those tall grasses through her fingertips. She looks up and the sky is opening its blue eyes. A trail of color, blazed through a marsh coming out of slumber.

But she forgets, in her moment, that hers is not the only trail forged this morning, for her grandpa walks beside her, stretching his limbs in accord with the distant trees. He marches beside her, no less ready, no less eager – a youth again in his old age.

Nearer the water, they choose a place to stop. This place will do, he thinks. I will stop here, she decides.

They wait for things to settle. They wait because they have stirred things up.
They wait.
They are here to catch dragonflies.

The first to come are the electric-blue ones, the ones that land at the tip of each grass and bend the delicate stalk with delicate weight. There are opaque-winged ones and ones with dots on them. Some have curled tails. Some have big eyes. Her favorite are the ones with big eyes. But I can never catch them, she thinks, because they always see me coming.

Somewhere to her right, her grandpa is pointing. Look at that dragonfly, he is saying. She opens her hand, but the dragonfly, as if fully aware of her intentions, takes momentary flight and lands elsewhere.

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