http://simone11.wordpress.com/2008/04/27/poem-from-prose-snapshots/ Sun, 18 May 2008 03:35:58 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://simone11.wordpress.com/2008/04/27/poem-from-prose-snapshots/#comment-75 soleh Sun, 18 May 2008 03:35:58 +0000 http://simone11.wordpress.com/?p=74#comment-75 When I read it, I remember about --<a href="http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Why-I-Choose-Frameless-Spectacles.124776" rel="nofollow">Spectacles Potry</a>-- When I read it, I remember about –Spectacles Potry–

]]> http://simone11.wordpress.com/2008/04/27/poem-from-prose-snapshots/#comment-69 sunwick Wed, 07 May 2008 23:09:36 +0000 http://simone11.wordpress.com/?p=74#comment-69 i like the concise observational tone. looking in my writerly way, I thought of switching up or eliminating "his eyes"-3rd line i like the concise observational tone. looking in my writerly way, I thought of switching up or eliminating “his eyes”-3rd line

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