On the fence
it hung
dogs nearing
me running
until I finally reached
it
the deer with its hoof caught
on the fence
I pressed
against it, smothering
it got away
and the dogs came nearer
and the trees pressed closer
I saw it again,
later,
well and beautiful.
Line Poem Response to Mary Oliver’s Once
February 14, 2008 · Leave a Comment
Categories: in-class · poems
Tagged: deer, dogs, fence, poetry, response, trees



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